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Eye

Eye

by JP Davies

Open as newborn nest,
how small the eye is.
Naked, skittering white,
blood vessels like cracking ice.
Not even bone to protect it
from sharpness, from light,
from all jabbing horrors.

Published in The Literary Hatchet

283rd Weekly Poetry Contest

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Very nice imagery! Keep up

Very nice imagery! Keep up the good work.

Lara Dolphin

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But still the eye never gives

But still the eye never gives up,,,it struggles and keeps helping the body to sense the beautiful life ,right...SUPERB!!!!!

..... Alienstar

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But still the eye keeps

But still the eye keeps struggling....its ready to break but never bends ...it helps one to sense the beautiful life and surrounding.........SUPERB!,,

..... Alienstar

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