Hieroglyphic Hearts BC

by MyNAh_27

On an ancient sea cave wall appeared this drawing of a tribal leaf clad pair whose fingers touched, whose deep blue eyes met and hearts dissolved in swirling tides of eros.
Underneath their saline scribble (translated) read as follows -
May this picture rule the waves forever more!

NB This poem is entirely fictional

217th Weekly Poetry Contest

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Enchanting and mystical write

Enchanting and mystical write, MyNAh. My daughter has blue eyes and this lovely poem reminded me of her. Warmest Wishes for the contest. ~

Regina

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I’m moved by your very human

I’m moved by your very human comment, Regina. Isn’t it extraordinary how coincidence surfaces at the most unexpected times? Especially regarding your daughter. Thank you for your kind description of my poem and the time involved on your part. I wish you and your unique style well in this and other contests

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Beautiful romantic image of

Beautiful romantic image of how you might see this cave wall drawing! Good luck in the competition MyNAh!

Mary PP

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Sincere thanks Mary for your

Sincere thanks Mary for your concise review of my entry. I made every effort to bring the reader to the scene of the cave and you as well as Regina spotted this. Your entry oozes positivity. Best of luck with it in this and other contests warm wishes MyNAh_27