The Last Moment by There is a moment I dread its arrival There is a moment Before I open my eyes There is a moment When the day is young There is a moment When you are my wife But the next moment You are lost And I die each day 45th Weekly Poetry Contest Report violation Comments The repetition works well The repetition works well here. The ending is surprisingly abrupt, which is perhaps the point It left me wanting more. John Reinhart http://patreon.com/johnreinhart https://www.facebook.com/JohnReinhartPoet Report SPAM Log in or register to post comments Log in or register to post comments
The repetition works well The repetition works well here. The ending is surprisingly abrupt, which is perhaps the point It left me wanting more. John Reinhart http://patreon.com/johnreinhart https://www.facebook.com/JohnReinhartPoet Report SPAM Log in or register to post comments
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The repetition works well
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