Classic Poem

1

And so I ask,
" Do you need both
skies? "

I say keep
" jets " and " its "
consistent.

I suggest
again
that you strip down
while remaining calm.

2

It may be that
reclining
lessens the pressure

(or presence),

but there are still
sensations

to be considered,

no, not " considered, "
dealt with,

no, not " dealt with "
either,

had , perhaps,

but with no rights
of possession,

no sense
of constituting
past