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Urchin on a cedar swing,
summer mist inhaler,
noonday shriek and frolic,
mother blowing fragrant  blossoms
at her golden offspring.
Lavenders amid  the shrouded reverie
pave a mystic wonderland aglow.

Rating
Average: 5 (1 vote)
Tue, 2020-06-02 20:24
#1
Regina Regina
How joyous, M. A prose poem that's such a gift to my senses with summer fun and innocence. Beauteous! :-)
Wed, 2020-06-03 07:11
#2
Regina,
Thank you sincerely for reviewing my work.
Your critiques are a template for me.
The fact that it appeals to you is a bonus.

M