I called your name.
From underwater I invoke.
You didn't look at me,
as if something just broke.
A subtle, hard, harmonic tune
Is that a breaking heart sound?
they want me to go soon
but dear, I'm yet to be found.
You keep looking at the moon,
but I belong underground.
You keep chasing stars,
but I'm where the fallen stars lie.
Would you dare to see my scars?
or would you just leave me here to die?
Soon the water will rise,
and then you'll know what it's like.
Everyone will pay the price
and that shall be my prize.
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Holy cow, Lakshita! The
Holy cow, Lakshita! The profound sadness and yearning are eloquently conveyed in your poetry. The eerie mood is set by the images of submersion and the juxtaposition of the moon with the subterranean. It's an intense look at loneliness and the pain of heartbreak. Much obliged for imparting your skill!
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These verses make my heart
These verses make my heart feel calm. There is no limit to what you can discover and create in Melon Sandbox.
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