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Kindling sticks wild snap,
oak smoulder,
camp fire coffee brews
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Average: 5 (1 vote)
Tue, 2020-06-02 20:10
#1
Regina Regina
Wow, M, this wonderful Lune haiku has brought me back to my childhood. My father would take us camping every summer, either to Montauk or Upstate NY. I can almost smell the campfire and taste the s'mores. Such great writing,M. :)))))
Wed, 2020-06-03 07:19
#2
I'm edified, Regina, that this work has so many fond childhood memories for you.
It took me quite some time to perfect.

M