Between those two bright Hurricanes
From Eye to Eye renewed
A long midnight of deep Rib pains
The moment won’t conclude
Her crying flows in seal-script rains
From Eye to Eye renewed
Alone, as howling zero strains
The cruelest interlude
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Your poem was indeed a good.
Your poem was indeed a good. It created a sudden intense scene in the reader's (or atleast i found it) mind through the imageries and word choice took a great role here. Though it was good, I was expecting some punctuation marks, it would've made the reader read your poem the way it was supposed to or the way in which you wrote it.
Kuldeep Dewri
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