Perish Part Two (Monoku)

Frightening perception,

Frightening perception, especially at this moment. I would like to read it again someday when it is not as real. Well done!

Angela Yuriko Smith

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My best regards and wishes, M

My best regards and wishes, M, for a win with this towering write !

Regina

Thank you so very much,

Thank you so very much, Angela, for your comment and for reading my work. M

Regina,

Regina, You are so generous and thoughtful. Many thanks for your review. M

Very short poems are not my

Very short poems are not my favorites so I’m probably not the target audience. This is very striking and disturbing, though, and seems like a great line from something a little longer.

I appreciate your fair and balanced critique, Clarice. For the sake of clarity this is not an extract or line from a larger piece though it might appear that way. Once again thank you for reading this entry M

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Perish Part Two (Monoku)

Perish Part Two (Monoku)

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